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April 21, 2024April 21, 2024

The Suspicious Woman 

Once there was a boy named Ahmed and a girl named Byter. They were very poor. Their parents told Ahmed and Byter, “We are going to the river to get some water.” Once they reached the river, Ahmed and Byter put their bucket in the river and their evil parents threw them in the river. Then their parents ran away. Then Ahmed and Byter quickly swam out and walked in the direction of their home. Then they went the wrong way and they came along a treehouse. They climbed the ladder and there came a huge colorful woman.
“Come come. I have a little surprise!” the woman said.
“Remember mom said don’t listen to strangers,” said Ahmed to Byter.
“I locked the door so you can’t escape,” said the woman.
“I see a hammer so we can break the door. The woman is far away. She can’t take us!” said Byter to Ahmed.
“I can do good tricks,” said the woman.
“I am going to run and get the hammer. You stay here,” said Ahmed to Byter.
“Are you looking at my tricks?” asked the woman.
Ahmad ran to get the hammer and picked it up. The woman ran and exclaimed, “Leave the hammer!”
In the time the woman was running, Ahmad already threw the hammer and broke the door but Byter was fast so she ran. The woman was old so she could only walk. Ahmad and Byter escaped and remembered they went the wrong way so they went the other way. Before the kids left, they dropped the ladder. The kids went home but their parents had died because there were three cheetahs that attacked the kids’ parents and they got a lot of scratches and bruises and then they died. Then they went to the adoption center and in a couple of weeks, Ahmad and Byter got adopted by a wonderful family.

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  • Hashim Cheema
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Comments (2)

  1. Zaytoon says:
    April 22, 2024 at 10:34 pm

    Hashim I am impressed
    Some humor and a interesting plot twist
    I can’t imagine Hashim wrote this 🥰

    Reply
  2. Juwairiyah Syed says:
    April 29, 2024 at 2:08 pm

    good job 😉

    Reply

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